Sunday 3 September 2017

sick sentences

The rider held on. His bike was going quickly over the ground. It was really dusty. He felt  excited and scared .  

      



       Nervously the rider grasped onto his handles.his bike was speeding down the dusty race track.He felt great and a little bit nervous.

The boy held out some food. The dragon ate it. He was green and had hor
The fancy dragon was eating slowly

Sam and the skydivers held on to each other. They were high up. It was scary

Sam and the skydivers clutched onto each other.they were up so high ,it felt like they were on top of world.it was so terrifying.

speech


School uniforms should be compulsory.

I think that school uniforms should be compulsory because school is school ,not a fashion show and with uniforms there's a better chance everyone will be treated the same because they all have the same uniform and there’s no competition..
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Kids are getting bullied about what clothes they wear.

Lots of kids that go to school either have very expensive clothes and then there's people that don't have expensive clothes because their parents can't afford to buy them. Sometimes kids get bullied   about not having cool clothes like others but if schools make  uniforms compulsory that's not going to happen because everyone has the same clothes and everyone is equal.

Kids expensive clothing could get stolen.
Lots of kids arrive to school with very expensive  and special clothing and end up taking it off when they're playing in the playground, and end up leaving it lying there   when the bell goes then  it can get   stolen or goes missing. This doesn’t make parents very happy.

Kids won't have to worry about what they're wearing.
If schools make uniforms compulsory kids won't have to worry every night about what they are going to wear the next day to school.With uniforms parents pay out once and not several times  during the year for new clothes . Some kids  want to wear something different every day, When you buy a uniform most times it lasts for the whole year.

Inappropriate clothing


Uniforms stop the chance of people wearing inappropriate clothing to school like boys who have the crutch of their pants hanging right down,and girls that were  short shorts and crop tops.

You can identify kids in uniform
If a child gets kidnapped runs away or goes missing from school  and someone spots them and see theirs uniform they will know  what school there from.


There are many advantages of wearing school uniforms as i've just discussed with you with you guys, hope you guys enjoyed my speech.









Thursday 1 June 2017

100 word story

I am trying to make my writing more exciting for the reader by varying ny sentence beginnings and using descriptive language.

Success criteria
Use a variety of sentence beginnings                             …I just couldn’t eat something so…
Use punctuation
Add adjectives and verbs


Last week I went  to a new restaurant that recently just opened in waikanae, I went  with my family.When we all arrived at the new restaurant I ordered a chocolate milkshake and a cheeseburger .After ten minutes of waiting my food finally came eww gross!!! My meat patty wasn't even cooked my cheese was moldy and my lettuce looked very yuk, and i just couldn't eat something so gross .When  i told the workers they gave me a new burger and it was yum

selfie writing

                        Success criteria
Use a variety of sentence beginnings
Use punctuation
Add adjectives and verbs


I am trying to make my writing more exciting for the reader by varying ny sentence beginnings and using descriptive language.




Selfie writing




YAAAAAAAAAY we beat Australia in the 2015 rugby world cup, i'm so proud to be holding the cup for the All blacks  for the second time.!!! Man the webb ellis cup is so shiny like I remembered and is still very heavy. Australia were crying because they didn't win the world cup but they soon got over it and received their medals for coming 2nd place..