100 word story

I am trying to make my writing more exciting for the reader by varying ny sentence beginnings and using descriptive language.

Success criteria

Use a variety of sentence beginnings                             …I just couldn’t eat something so…

Use punctuation

Add adjectives and verbs

Last week I went  to a new restaurant that recently just opened in waikanae, I went  with my family.When we all arrived at the new restaurant I ordered a chocolate milkshake and a cheeseburger .After ten minutes of waiting my food finally came eww gross!!! My meat patty wasn't even cooked my cheese was moldy and my lettuce looked very yuk, and i just couldn't eat something so gross .When  i told the workers they gave me a new burger and it was yum