Success criteria
Use a variety of sentence beginnings
Use punctuation
Add adjectives and verbs
I am trying to make my writing more exciting for the reader by varying ny sentence beginnings and using descriptive language.
Selfie writing
YAAAAAAAAAY we beat Australia in the 2015 rugby world cup, i'm so proud to be holding the cup for the All blacks for the second time.!!! Man the webb ellis cup is so shiny like I remembered and is still very heavy. Australia were crying because they didn't win the world cup but they soon got over it and received their medals for coming 2nd place..
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