my maths certificate

maths certificate

my popplet

100 word story

I am trying to make my writing more exciting for the reader by varying ny sentence beginnings and using descriptive language.

Success criteria

Use a variety of sentence beginnings                             …I just couldn’t eat something so…

Use punctuation

Add adjectives and verbs

Last week I went  to a new restaurant that recently just opened in waikanae, I went  with my family.When we all arrived at the new restaurant I ordered a chocolate milkshake and a cheeseburger .After ten minutes of waiting my food finally came eww gross!!! My meat patty wasn't even cooked my cheese was moldy and my lettuce looked very yuk, and i just couldn't eat something so gross .When  i told the workers they gave me a new burger and it was yum

selfie writing

                        Success criteria

Use a variety of sentence beginnings

Use punctuation

Add adjectives and verbs

I am trying to make my writing more exciting for the reader by varying ny sentence beginnings and using descriptive language.

Selfie writing

YAAAAAAAAAY we beat Australia in the 2015 rugby world cup, i'm so proud to be holding the cup for the All blacks  for the second time.!!! Man the webb ellis cup is so shiny like I remembered and is still very heavy. Australia were crying because they didn't win the world cup but they soon got over it and received their medals for coming 2nd place..

my 100 word story

I am trying to make my writing more exciting for the reader by varying my sentence beginnings and using descriptive language.

Success criteria

Use a variety of sentence beginnings

Use punctuation

Add adjectives and verbs

A few weeks ago I went on a walking tour with my rugby team, while we were in Australia.

On the tour we had a supervisor named Jack, He explained to us what we had to do if any dangerous animals tried to approach us, After he talked we began our journey. At first the walk was really nice  until a very, big, wide, orange,crocodile appeared showing its nasty sharp teeth, Be quiet everyone” whispered our supervisor Jack as i was nervously walking back my friend collapsed!