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A few weeks ago I went on a walking tour with my rugby team, while we were in Australia.
On the tour we had a supervisor named Jack, He explained to us what we had to do if any dangerous animals tried to approach us, After he talked we began our journey. At first the walk was really nice until a very, big, wide, orange,crocodile appeared showing its nasty sharp teeth, Be quiet everyone” whispered our supervisor Jack as i was nervously walking back my friend collapsed!
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